Day 56
I was riding the ocean.
Soft, steady waves.
Slowly began to increase in tide.
I wavered a bit but held on tight.
I quickly learnt to tame them
They were pulling me deeper
Right into the middle
Rain poured down upon me
The roar and anger of the ocean
Shook my soul but I kept going
Then a deathly wave rose and engulfed me
I was deep inside, sinking within
Not afraid but embracing it.
Fighting it, until I rose again.
Into Words 
I felt you embracing the storm little by little until the very last line. It’s a sharp change of direction which also impacts the overall mood. Or, at least, in my heart/mind. I thought there’d be something more to the embracing, finding comfort in the initially intimidating depths. Maybe you could write a second portion for the ascending back to light, rising like a phoenix?
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